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                                    Flash. Eyes. Burn. Cry.
                  The sun is too bright,
                  It kills the dying me,
                  Nothing seems real
                  In this harsh light,
                                    It's all red, orange, yellow,
                                    A rainbow's start,
                                    But it's end nowhere to be seen.
                  Bleeding eyes, (Eye sockets)
                  Burnt out of their sealed holes,
                  I can't stand the heat!
                  (Fall, fall, fall) Smash (Crawl, crawl, crawl)
                                    Shade. Shade! Over there!
                                    Under the tree,
                                    Under the burning bush!
                                    Escape to God's fire!
                                    (Escape from God's fire?)
                  The pain, the light!
                  Just a mid-summer's day!
                  Just an afternoon stroll!
                  The torture I receive!
©2007-2009 ~lockethehunter
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For the VisualLit contest, inspired by the piece Sunstroke: [link]

Yes, I promised I wouldn't write anything. But I really liked the look of this contest...
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Did you make sure to note =VisualLit so they can add it to their favourites and to the roster for the challenge? Also note the artist that this poem was based on because he has a say on who wins, too, I think.

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